Thursday, 14 August 2014

Punctuating a paragraph

Go! yelled dad, he was yelling at the TV while watching the boxing. During the Commonwealth games,  Dad was watching very intensely David Nyika looked strong. Boom his opponent, was knocked to the ground hooray we all shouted David won gold and he is a champion, wow I thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up.

This is another one of my Punctuated paragraph.

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